Post by Neutral12 on Jan 18, 2007 23:13:23 GMT -5
This is one day when brandy, cuttie, rodulph, snowey, and Gary were at school I plan on making it a comic if you didn't here about Chao adventure and these characters go to Chao of the future before you read this. Read it I bet it will be a good story. If you like comics you might like this story it is more of a story though. Once you are done reading tell me how you think about it I will use your opinions for future Shows
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THE RANDOM SCHOOL DAY
Chao adventure
Comics
Comic#1
By: neutral12
Narrator: One day brandy and his friends went to school and sonic took them all their as always then they got their pencils and started their first classhat witch was math..........
Brandy: How come Charon always gets the best seat.
Gary: Maybe because he is a bully Chao and he was mean to us ever since we destroyed eggmans plan with the dark Chao.
Brandy: Oh well we have to sit separate from each other AGAIN!!!
Narrator: Charon is Brandy and his friend’s evil rival he comes and attacks them ever since eggmans Chao plan was disrupted. And now where we left off.......
Teacher: OK classhat today we have to do are X's tables (Charon does a spit ball on snowey)
Snowey: cut it out!!
Cuttie: yeah what she said she is only 1!!
Teacher: stop arguing or I will send you both to the principles office.
Snowey&cuttie: yes Mrs. Sparkle...
Teacher: now who can tell me what 5x5 is
Rodulph: ooooh! Oooooooohh!! Pick me Mrs. Sparkle
Teacher: yes rodulph what’s the answer
Rodulph: it is 25 Mrs. Sparkle.
Teacher: good job rodulph very good. Now lets do harder X's tables (Charon throws a paper plane at rodulph saying Mrs. Sparkle is a dummy)
Rodulph: what’s this!? (Teacher walks over) ohhh man I'm busted...
Teacher: what a paper saying I'm a dummy!!!
Rodulph: I didn't write it I am serious it just appeared.
Teacher: OK I believe you who's responsible for this showing it to everyone.
rodulph: I think I know it was Charon I know because he bully's me & my friends everyday.
Teacher: CHARON!!!! To the principle's office now!!!!!
Charon
walks out the door) he whispers to himself, I hate you rodulph....
Narrator: when the teacher got done saying about 16 X's tables the bell rang and Brandy and his friends got out of the math room and.........
Cuttie: why is Charon a brat all the time!
Snowey: I know he messed up my perfectly good hair and I work hard on it hopefully he is not coming in the next class.
Rodulph: witch is science.
Gary: who knows what could happen next he could drink a chemical and turn into an insact clone of eggman
All 5 of them: hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!!!!
Gary: we better hurry before we are late.
The other 4: OK.
Narrator: so they went to their next classhat witch was science and Charon wasn't their so they all sat together FINALLY!!! And listened to their science teacher Mr. Bert
Mr. Bert: welcome everyone today we are learning about different kinds of wires this is are first one (he holds up a gba connection cord) who can tell me what it is.
Bubbie : (witch is a smart Chao) that wire in your hand is what we call a gameboy advance cord (he explains it)
Mr. Bert: good bubbie you advance in science well.
narrator: then when Mr. Bert was explaining extra stuff about the cord brandy looked at the door and saw Charon sneak into the classroom from his detention with a D battery and.......
Brandy: thinking to himself (how did Charon get out of detention is that even possible? what is he going to do with that d battery?)
Narrator: Charon snook behind the desk and slowly started to stick the tip of the battery on an end of the cord and then......
Brandy: WATCH OUT!!!!! (As he yelled it out very loudly)
narrator: it was to late the teacher grabbed the other end of the cord and he got electrocuted so much you could see his bones then he fell to the ground and Charon ran off some people fainted some cried but brandy and his friends didn't cry or faint they called the principle immediately then he was taken to the hospital then because of this everyone had to wait for the bell........
Brandy: awwwwww this stinks it always Charon's fault why why WHY!!!!
Rodulph: because he is a bad person just like eggman
Gary: look on the bright side brandy at lest you didn't get hurt
Brandy: you are right but you don't understand that was my favorite teacher I guess Charon hates him along with us
Snowey&cuttie: HE WAS ARE FAVORITE TO YOU KNOW!!!!!
Brandy: we have to stop him I am tired of all this mombo-jumbo
The other 4: agreed!
Narrator: then the bell rang they were all happy because they finally got to eat at least they still hope that Charon doesn't come and hopefully not with his gang.
{Will brandy and his friends ever defeat Charon and his gang if they show up? will they bring peace to their school so their isn't any of this weird stuff going on? find out on part two}
________________________________________________________
THE RANDOM SCHOOL DAY
Chao adventure
Comics
Comic#1
By: neutral12
Narrator: One day brandy and his friends went to school and sonic took them all their as always then they got their pencils and started their first classhat witch was math..........
Brandy: How come Charon always gets the best seat.
Gary: Maybe because he is a bully Chao and he was mean to us ever since we destroyed eggmans plan with the dark Chao.
Brandy: Oh well we have to sit separate from each other AGAIN!!!
Narrator: Charon is Brandy and his friend’s evil rival he comes and attacks them ever since eggmans Chao plan was disrupted. And now where we left off.......
Teacher: OK classhat today we have to do are X's tables (Charon does a spit ball on snowey)
Snowey: cut it out!!
Cuttie: yeah what she said she is only 1!!
Teacher: stop arguing or I will send you both to the principles office.
Snowey&cuttie: yes Mrs. Sparkle...
Teacher: now who can tell me what 5x5 is
Rodulph: ooooh! Oooooooohh!! Pick me Mrs. Sparkle
Teacher: yes rodulph what’s the answer
Rodulph: it is 25 Mrs. Sparkle.
Teacher: good job rodulph very good. Now lets do harder X's tables (Charon throws a paper plane at rodulph saying Mrs. Sparkle is a dummy)
Rodulph: what’s this!? (Teacher walks over) ohhh man I'm busted...
Teacher: what a paper saying I'm a dummy!!!
Rodulph: I didn't write it I am serious it just appeared.
Teacher: OK I believe you who's responsible for this showing it to everyone.
rodulph: I think I know it was Charon I know because he bully's me & my friends everyday.
Teacher: CHARON!!!! To the principle's office now!!!!!
Charon
walks out the door) he whispers to himself, I hate you rodulph....Narrator: when the teacher got done saying about 16 X's tables the bell rang and Brandy and his friends got out of the math room and.........
Cuttie: why is Charon a brat all the time!
Snowey: I know he messed up my perfectly good hair and I work hard on it hopefully he is not coming in the next class.
Rodulph: witch is science.
Gary: who knows what could happen next he could drink a chemical and turn into an insact clone of eggman
All 5 of them: hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaa!!!!!!
Gary: we better hurry before we are late.
The other 4: OK.
Narrator: so they went to their next classhat witch was science and Charon wasn't their so they all sat together FINALLY!!! And listened to their science teacher Mr. Bert
Mr. Bert: welcome everyone today we are learning about different kinds of wires this is are first one (he holds up a gba connection cord) who can tell me what it is.
Bubbie : (witch is a smart Chao) that wire in your hand is what we call a gameboy advance cord (he explains it)
Mr. Bert: good bubbie you advance in science well.
narrator: then when Mr. Bert was explaining extra stuff about the cord brandy looked at the door and saw Charon sneak into the classroom from his detention with a D battery and.......
Brandy: thinking to himself (how did Charon get out of detention is that even possible? what is he going to do with that d battery?)
Narrator: Charon snook behind the desk and slowly started to stick the tip of the battery on an end of the cord and then......
Brandy: WATCH OUT!!!!! (As he yelled it out very loudly)
narrator: it was to late the teacher grabbed the other end of the cord and he got electrocuted so much you could see his bones then he fell to the ground and Charon ran off some people fainted some cried but brandy and his friends didn't cry or faint they called the principle immediately then he was taken to the hospital then because of this everyone had to wait for the bell........
Brandy: awwwwww this stinks it always Charon's fault why why WHY!!!!
Rodulph: because he is a bad person just like eggman
Gary: look on the bright side brandy at lest you didn't get hurt
Brandy: you are right but you don't understand that was my favorite teacher I guess Charon hates him along with us
Snowey&cuttie: HE WAS ARE FAVORITE TO YOU KNOW!!!!!
Brandy: we have to stop him I am tired of all this mombo-jumbo
The other 4: agreed!
Narrator: then the bell rang they were all happy because they finally got to eat at least they still hope that Charon doesn't come and hopefully not with his gang.
{Will brandy and his friends ever defeat Charon and his gang if they show up? will they bring peace to their school so their isn't any of this weird stuff going on? find out on part two}