My chao.

[vail]

My chao Melon (chaos chao) swam fast in the pool so another chao came and saw him swimming so he jumped in. Then melon came and pushed him around.(The other chao name was Belle)(Belle had all of stamina maxed)(and had a skunk tail). And after that it pushed it to the shore of the pool. Then Belle sang.It sounded like 'Alleluia'
When Melon came out Belle came and skipped around him, All of the sudden Belle farted and Melon ran to the tower in the Hero garden and flew all the way to the other side of the pool.
THE END!

[Occorru]

Rating 2/10. It's too short, too undescriptive and you ended it with "The End". Plus it's full of fragments and is missing some grammer.

[vail]

Thanks for telling me that.

[Quartz™]

0/10
This isn't your story, is it?

[♠Ace Element♠]

This should probably go into 'Chao Other', if you don't get another entry

[vail]

That is a story Quartz if you don't mind.

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